ehhhh.....

I love the song, nice choice... but the visuals were hardly entertaining... nice concept though

Not half bad

Well, i liked most of it...
especially when everything stopped when Mario said he loved Bowser, even the stars stopped...

The opening scene: there was a spot somewhere, maybe in the ships picture file, that covers up some stars when it goes by.

Umm... i really do think you should get some sort of recording program and a microphone =)
i think this could go somewhere with enough practice....

also, if you do wish to take this places... work on the fight scenes... custom sprites should be used

If all else fails, submit to Mentos (C) for a short commercial, skipping the short intro

-.-

Boring

Seen it before, in a lot of places. Also the penguins don't disappear after you fire them so it gets crowded in some levels and harder to pass them without firing off 50 penguins. Penguin cannons have been specifically done before, but that doesn't make this a terrible game, just overdone.

I'm just gonna go and listen to all your songs now...

halfway through I had to change my pants.
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